【林海听峰】童鞋们阿峯给了我无限的力量~

星期一不是英语月考吗~
然后要写作文
作文名字是：The best xxx I know
我打了个草稿
然后写上去了
20分只扣了3分~~~
其实一处没用代词，一处用词不适，一次一激动词组写错了- -
下面上图~~~

The best star I know
Raymond Lam，he is the best star that I have never seen before.In fact，his father is very rich，so he knows he needs to pay more attention to prove his ability.And he always works hard.Nowadays，he is the most popular star in TVB.He sings very wonderfully and acts many great films.He's also kind to fans.One day，there was an activity.And it was crowded.A“honey”'s mobile phone fell down.He picked it up immediately and returned to her.All his fans were worried about if he was hurt.According to this，I want to ask everyone：He deserves to be the best star，doesn't he？


阿峯真是我无线的动力源泉

虽然看不懂英文，还是觉得小烟好厉害

我所知最好的明星
林峯，他是我见过最好的明星。事实上，由于他父亲富有的原因，所以他很清楚的知道他需要花更多的精力来证明自己的能力。他总是努力工作。如今，他是TVB地区最有人气的明星。他唱歌非常完美并且演了许许多多的精彩电影。他对粉丝也很好。有天，有场活动。现场十分拥挤。某honey的手机掉了。他立刻捡起并还给了她。所有他的粉丝都在担心他是否受伤。通过这个，我想问每个人一个问题：他作为最好的明星当之无愧，不是吗？

写得很好

楼楼写得好啊。顶一个！

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