这个是五句话作文，就是全部的信息点要用五句话表达。

吸毒的人junkle这个词是查的…实在不知道怎么表达。不知道可不可以the+adj.表一类人。但是"毒品的"又得怎么翻译……还有老是不知道怎么用从句

这是大作文，120词左右，先看材料，然后用三十个词概括全文，再完成下面题目。

谁有空就看一眼吧，没空就算了

@A蓝泪A @527888579

特么的！我拿手机写了快一个小时的东西，不小心碰下屏幕都特么没了！我要疯了！

你不着急的话我拿电脑再写一遍绝壁要疯的节奏

吸毒有害身体，如果用harm的短语，可以do sb. harm 或 do harm to sb：Taking drugs does harm to your body。
as a result 后面要加逗号，而且这个短语一般都放在作文的后面，作为总结。
可以改成so或者therefore，后面的改成完整的句子，形成因果关系，意思怎么说可以自己修改。quicken作为动词需要主语的，用it代替主语。
and用于连接两个并列的动词，也就是主语统一， lead to 和bring out 主语应该都是taking drugs（我后改的），但是由于逗号不能连接两个单句，所以可以改成leading people to commit a crime and bringing out delicts。（其实我觉得你写这块没啥问题，我习惯写完整所以belabela。）
原因那部分，我感觉这么写会更好一点：一半以上的青少年吸食大麻的原因是由于好奇心and（自我感觉用and比逗号好，主语都是reason）百分之三十是由于什么（我怕写错了你自己翻译吧）。the reason why ……is that
”为了刺激和消除烦恼“for kicks and removing trouble ，不是为了烦恼。后面的“或者其他”不需要加逗号的，直直接or other。你咋这么喜欢逗号呢。
不要和吸毒的人做朋友，可以这么说：Don*t make friends with people who take drugs （还可以凑字数我是不多么的机智hh）
保持乐观的生活态度 keeping an optimistic attitude to life（词可以尽量高大上一些，你的也对。这是前几天刚背过的所以记住了。）
第二次写感觉看的更细了，但还是由于我学渣水平有限，可能还给你改错了也说不准，要慎重啊慎重。我是按我写作习惯来看的，所以你没错的地方我也对比了一下。
不同地区的英语要求还真不一样，我们写的都特别简单，100词随便写写分就到手了。

额，因为我用的ipad版回复有点囧，楼上大神也说的很具体了，就大概说一下一些明显基础的错误。
第一句话harm badly body 有点怪怪的，taking drugs is harmful to the body会好一点
as a result一般用在句首。
加速的话，speed up 和accelerate会更加常用一点（当然由于个人不用quicken应该也是对的吧）
（话说那个oddescent是啥完全查不到还是我看错了ˊ_>ˋ
话说delict这个词我也不知道，看了一下字典好像具体指严重刑事不法吧，（辣么高端洋气我只会用criminal啊！）
half of the reason 其实可以省略哎
Or other 什么？other reason会比较好
虽然后面感觉不错但还是哪里怪怪的。。我太水不知道该怎么说。
我大概改了下，求大神们轻拿轻放
Taking drugs is harmful to the body. It not only accelerates the death rate, also leads and brings out more criminals. A number of factors are considered to be accountable for freak-out. The survey shows that half of the teenagers take drugs because of their curiosity. Furthermore, 30% of the teenagers are cheated to take the drugs. The rest of teenagers choose to take drugs in order to relieve themselves from trouble, or other things which give them a lot of pressure. Therefore, it's necessary not to make friends with those who take drug. keeping a positive attitude towards life and a healthy lifestyle also helps teenagers get away from drugs.

重新写了一篇，综合你们的意见
Taking drugs dose harm to your body,which it not only quicken death for junkle ,also leads and brings out more criminals.A number of factors are considered to be accountable for freak-out.The survey shows that more than half of the teenagers take drugs because of their curiosity and furthermore 30% of the teenagers are cheated to take the drugs.In addition,the rest of teenagers take drugs for kicks and removing trouble or ohter things which give them a lot of presure.Therefore,it*s necessary not to friend with those who take drugs and keeping an optimistic attitude to life and a healthy lifestyle also helps teenagers gei away from drugs.
@A蓝泪A @527888579

Taking drugs dose harm to your body,which not only quickens death for junkle 第一句
Therefore,it*s necessary not to be friend with those who take drugs and keep an optimistic attitude to life and a healthy lifestyle also helps teenagers get away from drugs.最后一句。。没了，挺好的，虽然因为要缩句子有好多and啊0w0

The reason why the man is able to survive in the car accident is because many passers-by don*t hestitate to help(hestitate 是犹豫的意思，这里是毫不犹豫，help也可以改成give a hand to，但我不是很清楚复数可不可以用= =）.（第一段最后一句我没看懂啥意思所以大概照自己想法改了）. The behavior that people unified together in order to help a stranger impressed me a lot.
This passage shows me that unity plays a very important role in the everyday life(像 be importnt往往可以改成play an important role/part）. The power of individual is limited, however, if people*s power unified, they will be able to overcome a lot of trouble.(我只知道fortrss是堡垒的意思，不知道还有啥比喻义，所以没用）When everybody adds fuel, the flames rise high.
It reminds me of my experience in a tug of war in my school. Our class fell behind at first(at the beginning 也可以）But we didn*t give up.（后面那句是甚= =查了还是不懂啊）Finally, we beat the other class.our wills unified and dragged the rope to our side. Therefore, I considered unity as an important thing.
大概就这样= =字数不够再凑一点吧，例子挺好的。
还有我不敢瘦十斤啊再瘦就没了！！