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犬微文:红豆女之恋(申精)

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我:日暮离,是一个她们常说的十足的丑女,可我不信那个歪理邪说,丑有什莫不可以?
犬夜叉:小学时我的追求对象,后来,他竟……
杀生丸:很有钱,对我很好,追求我。
桔梗:貌美但心不美,总喜欢抢我的一切事物,处处为难我,死对头。
珊瑚:和我一样,不漂亮,原先讨厌我,可后来不一样咯!喜欢弥勒,后来又……
弥勒:不帅,绝招:所谓的杀人微笑。喜欢珊瑚(是后来呦)
简介先结束,后面的人物自己看吧!^@^


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1楼2005-12-24 20:23回复
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    3楼2005-12-25 13:37
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      谢谢你!楼上的!你的回复给了我勇气!THANKYOU我要发了!^@^


      4楼2005-12-26 19:24
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        哇!我要抓狂拉!干吗桔梗总能吸引大家的眼球?而我则遭到白眼?我有那末难看吗?总算到了,呼!
        卡哇一!刚到就遇见帅哥拉!桃花运阿!我跑上前去:‘嗨!你好!我是新来的!请问你叫什莫名字?我叫日暮离,我……”还没等我说完,那个帅哥就走向了旁边的桔梗,干什莫?气死我了!看我上去不扁死他?我光的一脚,揣到了他的腿上,大喊:“喂!臭小子!你干吗不理我?你找死呀?”那个男的也急眼了!从着我大喊:“喂!有你这样的吗?干吗上来就打人啊!你要死阿!长得难看,还这末凶!长大嫁不出去了!”什莫?居然说我:“喂!你找死呀!滚把你!哼!”
        只听桔梗揉揉得说:“犬夜叉,别生她的气,我们走吧!”他就是犬夜叉?恶心,其实名字很帅,可是刚才的事让我认为它是一大衰哥,汗~~~~~~~~他的名字让我联想到了:母夜叉!!!!!!
        我愤恨的瞪了他一眼!什莫帅哥?简直就是衰哥,其实我的心底很好的,只是桔梗太会装了!害的无辜的我总是很惨!嗨!算了,找工作把!


        下一级:什莫?就这工作?!









        大家顶一顶把!这不是和《红豆女之恋》完全一样的!不是扒超文!大家顶一顶!我闪拉~~~~~~~~~~


        5楼2005-12-26 21:53
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          就算不写桔梗是主角也不用写他是奸角啊,我有看过红豆女只恋的.我知道你说他是谁!


          6楼2005-12-26 22:00
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            我说过了,桔梗在这里不坏的,我改了阿!结局时会完美的!桔梗后来好了,不欺负阿里了!^_^你误会了!嘻嘻!新年快乐


            7楼2005-12-26 22:20
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              8楼2005-12-27 22:16
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                9楼2005-12-28 20:30
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                  10楼2005-12-28 20:48
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                    洗冤了!嘻嘻!继续发咯!


                    11楼2006-01-02 18:41
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                      这时,一个肥肥的大胖子走了过来,与桔梗攀谈起来,呵!我受不了了!干什莫!(我只是轻微的吃醋)
                      过了一阵,桔梗过来了,对我满脸坏笑得说:“老板说了,你,去干木偶娃娃着工作把!反正你的难看,他们也看不到,到时候会有许多孩子围着你呢!”
                      什莫?孩子?!
                      哇~~我从小到大最受不了小孩了,我见到他们好想吐!恶~~~~~~~~~
                      没办法!啊!挺着把!谁叫我没人民币呢?



                      先发点,待会再接着法!


                      12楼2006-01-02 19:04
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                        张那拉的


                        13楼2006-01-02 19:05
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