对于一个初二的学生,这已经非常ok了我觉得。应该开始学习书面语的逻辑层次了(复合句子之间的逻辑关联,句子与句子之间的逻辑关联:),英文写作很吃这个。比如这里的话题,household work,需要从几个方面来说,①it does not take up much time needed for learning.②to do mental and manual work alternately is much reasonable and healthy.③it saves the parents from from fatigue after all - day hard work and pleases them mentally and physically。.④to be able to do domestic chores is essential in the future when we have to be independent。随便写了几点,当然如果你把逻辑关联串联得更好,那就是考验作文了。不要迷恋那些空荡荡的作文模板,毛用没有(起码对于你的水平,那些是给作文不及格的人用的)。多读英文简易版小说,然后是原版小说,特别重要。