15年有人用这种文章成功过，我可以效仿么？

Dear Valve Services:
I’m writing this letter to complain about the game Grand Theft Auto and demand a full refund.
I bought the game on 24, February, looking forward to getting a surprise. After buying this game, however, I found it awful to play---Maybe it’s not my type, maybe I am too fastidious, but I really dislike it from the bottom of my heart! It is a non-entertaining game for me that I can’t enjoy it at all! I saved 30 dollars, only to find it’s a waste of money and time! Talking about time, I unexpectedly played it for about 12 12.450 hours and it really disappointed me a lot!
I hope I can get my money back and use it into some more meaningful things like charity. I’m sorry to trouble you, but I’m writing the letter sincerely for my refund.
At last, I would be appreciate if you can return my deal and my money to Alipay!
That’s all I want to say, Thank you!
Steam ID:rikkadw
Date: 6.6.2015